Pallian covers the braziers and sweeps away the ash traceries of the 
pattern that has covered the small clearing in front of the stone bench 
at the back of the gardens. The other elements of the ritual are already
 gone, devoured by the forces that answered his call. He has acquired 
another initiation, the first he has chosen for himself. 
His father might disapprove, and that risk is why he has kept his 
actions secret. Still, limiting himself to the skills and abilities that
 his father has chosen for him is a risk as well, especially here in the
 heart of the court. He has chosen his path carefully, selecting an 
initiation that will complement those he has already, and offer him 
resources that don't rely on sorcery.
He hears footsteps along the gravel path, and shoves the twin braziers 
back into the bushes. By the time the servant arrives and kneels beside 
him, he is sitting on the stone bench and staring idly up at the moon: a
 young man taking in the evening air.
"My lord," says the servant softly, "the Wizard-King demands your urgent presence."
His heart freezes solid for a beat, then another, then a third. At last 
it begins to beat again, and he turns to regard the girl without 
expression. "I attend," he says, and starts back towards the keep.
Note:
I know that those of you who've been following this story for a while have seen this scene at least twice before. That's a fairly normal part of the writing process; I like this little flashback, and it still fits with the current plotline, so I'm simply slotting it back in where I think it makes sense. We'll move on to new developments next week.
 
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